Despite the title, this story starts out well enough for its genre: its subject, Henry Armstrong, finds himself buried but, unusually, not dead. The narration is in third-person, but is limited to the subject’s point of view, and thus gives us a personal sense of the claustrophobia of being buried alive, as well as its accompanying darkness and silence. The one piece missing from this scenario, the first emotion one would generally feel upon finding oneself in this predicament, is desperation. Henry Armstrong seems oddly calm for a man in his situation. He is described as always having been “a hard man to convince”, and that, though all of his senses “[compel] him to admit” that he has certainly been buried, this fact alone does not serve to convince him that he is, in fact, dead. I’m not sure any of us would be convinced either, in his situation, but stating it this way brings it oddly into focus. He finds himself to be seriously ill, and that he has “the invalid’s apathy”, which accounts for his lack of decisive action in the face of what is otherwise, or even still likely, certain death. And so, he falls asleep.
The narrative pauses here and resumes “in the grey of the morning” when the two students arrive back at the medical college, pale and still terrified by their misadventure, and begin to wonder what to do given what they had seen. At the back of the building they find a horse and wagon hitched to the gate, and, upon entering the dissection room, they meet Jess, who stands and asks for the money he was promised. They turn, and see, on the long dissecting table, the naked body of Henry Armstrong, whose head is “defiled with blood and clay from a blow with a spade”. It was here that I was utterly taken aback. I had not expected the story to end so soon, after merely a page and a half, and had been so engrossed in the story that I hadn’t noticed the empty half of the page growing nearer the further I read.
Herein lies, I believe, part of the success of this horror story. It wouldn’t be a horror story with the successful rescue of Mr. Armstrong, but, all things considered, one’s hope is abruptly dispatched in the last two sentences of the story. Jess certainly was no common man doing the job of a bodysnatcher; he still retains the presence of mind to walk back to the frightful scene and finish the job he was going to be paid for. It didn’t matter to him that the man was alive and that he had, by some stroke of luck, just rescued him from certain death; he was digging up a body for cash and was going to make sure he did just that.
Another part of the success of this story is the humor that Ambrose Bierce mixed in with the horror. His description of Henry Armstrong waking up in the buried coffin by itself would be enough to make one question the genre of the story being horror if not for the situation the character finds himself in. He, buried alive, remains “a hard man to convince”, despite all his senses proclaiming his situation. His apathy in the face of a horrendous death, too, is comical. Had he found himself buried alive in one of Poe’s stories, he would most certainly not have been able to fall asleep. Jess, too, serves as some comic relief; his description as “gigantic” seems a bit cliché in a horror story, but his calm demeanor and levelheadedness are distinctly un-horrifying. His reaction to the students’ entry is also quite funny: he stands up from the bench where he’s been sitting, grins, and requests the money he is owed.
Job, and story, done.